Audience feedback from Storyboard

Positive feedback:

The audience that our group showed our story board to thought that all of our shots are going to be really beautiful, which conforms to common conventions of a slasher film, as they really liked our location. Our location is in Loose Valley and we choose this because we wanted beautiful shots and a naturalistic setting to our film opening.

Another positive comment that they made is that they also really like the idea of sound manipulation. We are going to use this in the ringtone of the broken phone to distort it and make it sound broken, and the sound of the music coming from the victims headphones after the phone has been dropped. This is also a common convention of slasher films but will hopefully sound really effective.

Improvements:

The audience didn't think we should use bloody footprints coming from the killer as there would be no reason for him to have blood on his boots before he has killed the victim.

Another comment is that we should test the lighting to see what time of day we would need to film.  We also need to test the blood pack again cushion being stabbed and blood/ food colouring down the stream. We need to test these to see if it will have the right effect, which one to use, and that we want and that it will actually work.

The audience also think that we should use the title 'Silent Killer' as it fits more with our theme and conforms to common titles of slasher films as it is short and says it how it is.