Audience Feedback
What went well:- One of the things that went well in our audience feedback is that most people really liked the blood in our clips. They thought that it was really realistic and looked really effective.
- People also liked our use of sound manipulation
- They also liked that you could still hear the sound of the music playing through the headphones really quietly, when the phone was dropped onto the floor.
Improvements:
- Make the title screen longer
- Another improvement that our group needs to make based on our feedback is that we need to cut out some of the waterfalls at the beginning of our opening scene as they are not needed. However, we are going to keep the ones that build up tension before the victim is stabbed.
- Some of the feedback that we were given is that our professional production company logo, Blumhouse, is used more for psychological horrors rather than slasher horror films.
- People also said that the Professional production company logo was the out of date version, therefore our group decided that we would change it to Lionsgate's horror version of their professional production company logo.
- Another thing that our group needs to improve is the brightness. In the feedback that we got they think our film opening will look more effective if it was darker and it will also make it creepier.
- Some of the blood colouring in some of our shots is quite bright red therefore we are going to adjust the lighting and saturation to try and make it look more realistic.
- As the killer walks up the steps following the victim, he scrapes a knife against a chai link fence. In the feedback that we got the audience think that it would sound more effective if we added a scarping sound of a knife to the clip.
- There was also some background noise of wind in our clip, which we need to cut out.
We divided up these improvements within our group so that we all could improve our film opening. I changed the production company logo to the Lionsgate horror professional company logo. I also deleted the wind background sound in one of our shots of the victim in the alley. Below our screenshots of me completing these improvements.
Need to explain in intro what your audience feedback was, i.e. presentation of draft production.
ReplyDeleteAlso - improvements too basic. Can't just be 1 line and 2 screen grabs. Explain process of making changes and how they have impacted your piece for the better