AS Media - Opening Scene Feedback and Improvements

The Brief:

- To consider the audience feedback and implement any changes necessary.

After reading the comments regarding improvements needed, there were significant consistencies such as the too repetitive nature of having a shot of a waterfall as a break between the main narrative. With this in mind I decided to remove the beginning waterfall as in the space of three clips there are two waterfall shots, making one unnecessary. Hence, below, I deleted one of them.

After this, we gained feedback on the length of the typography appearing being too short, therefore I had to change this, I started by deleting the original transition between the typography and the first scene as seen below.

After this I attempted to extend the length of the clip further to fill the time necessary, however this did not work.

Therefore, I had to re-import the text into final cut and select the 8 seconds of footage needed. Using CMD + I to import I then highlighted the text and dragged and dropped it into the correct position.

After this I re-applied a different effect that shakes the screen slightly with a blur as the original radial blur was seen as unconventional.

After this I addressed the improvement necessary of adding sound over the title, as seen below i created a fade out and fade in from the highlighted green audio clip of a stream running to the start of the film.